on some deleted poem
7 Mar 2007, 10:09 PM
a bit story like...but a nice little tale...and who says every poem has to rhyme and jingle...fair attempt
on some deleted poem
7 Mar 2007, 10:16 PM
what about Mis(s)interpreted for a title...by the way a different style, must say
on A Rendezvous by lrustagi
7 Mar 2007, 11:03 PM
as an afterthought, i suppose "Sleepless" might be a better title...the readers pls. also suggest an apt title .
on Rock and Roll by wilco
7 Mar 2007, 11:09 PM
nice personification...i think the whole stanza should not be reapeated considering the lyric as a whole is a short one...may be repeating one or two key lines would be better. The lyric makes its point clear in a motivated sense. good attempt.