| Re: Veins by helenwales |
11-Oct-06/4:29 AM |
it has the cheek of early Yeats, the wind resistance of byron, and eminems special sauce.
I give it four out of four air pies.
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11-Oct-06/4:31 AM |
A line from the simpsons?
Damn, i really thought I had struck white gold with this one.
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11-Oct-06/6:01 AM |
also, don't you think that your comment is a little ironic, considering the subject matter?
Was it a bodily response to the rhythm? or a pattern thing due to poems written before?
Just tryin to understand. I guess you have to know the rules to be able to adequately break em huh?
teach me, netpoets, teach me...
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11-Oct-06/9:41 PM |
its a dead poets society rip off - first half setting it up to say something - but really it is doing what it is criticising. I don't know - Sam Mendes attributes meaning to his films, after the fact. Argues that he subconsciously framed Road to Perdition with ideas which happened to coincide with complimentary reviews from overly analytical critics.
Don't you love attributing meaning after the fact? style then substance yeah...
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| Re: He Cares So Little About His Self by Hostileintent |
11-Oct-06/9:56 PM |
slightly melodramatic - bits and pieces really 'work' though.
Don't listen to helenwales, she writes for post 2000 Vanilla Ice.
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| Re: Soy Flat White with One by helenwales |
11-Oct-06/10:17 PM |
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yeah - i enjoy frying them up with some cheese.
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14-Oct-06/11:10 PM |
it's about the uprising in Prague, in 1999.
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