Re: limited knowledge, limited people by kaoriliveshere	9-Jul-06/6:28 AM
I have say that in this poem I descided to rhyme. It is came out better then without rhyming. thank you guys! This poem is about Christopher columbus journey to Cuba help not to limit people's knowledge about the Earth. I hope you guys like it.
Re: a comment on Devil's Deal by kaoriliveshere	6-Jul-06/4:52 PM
I don't like rhyming my poems most of the time. My vocabulary is not that big so when I rhyme my poems sound elementry. I working on extend vocab though.