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limited knowledge, limited people (Free verse) by kaoriliveshere
The hate for my knowledge is anew. It dont matter to me when I know The whole world is at my feet When I am still on this wooden boat. They can me feel stupid at every instant moment. They can jeer until they are permently quiet. It won't leave any bruise on my leather My will for no limits with only grow bigger. At the end of this journey they will comprehend That we won't die at the edge of the world. God of Gravity will protect us from the great dive, And will turn us upside down to see undiscover people. The limits of their knowledge will evaporate. I will hold the reponsiblity for the excuse They will glory in the guilt of their opinion That we were limited by the deep blue ocean.

Up the ladder: Round and Round
Down the ladder: A Light in the Dark

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.0
Weighted score: 4.905148
Overall Rank: 9741
Posted: July 9, 2006 6:25 AM PDT; Last modified: July 9, 2006 6:25 AM PDT
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[n/a] kaoriliveshere @ 70.191.135.11 | 9-Jul-06/6:28 AM | Reply
I have say that in this poem I descided to rhyme. It is came out better then without rhyming. thank you guys! This poem is about Christopher columbus journey to Cuba help not to limit people's knowledge about the Earth. I hope you guys like it.
[n/a] Ranger @ 86.140.66.240 | 10-Jul-06/12:43 AM | Reply
'They can me feel stupid'?

Deep blue ocean is very very very cliched, see if you can be a bit more inventive there.
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