poemranker ::limited knowledge, limited people by kaoriliveshere

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Free verse № 144487

limited knowledge, limited people

Member since 2006 · Posted 9 Jul 2006 · 2 comments

The hate for my knowledge is anew. It dont matter to me when I know The whole world is at my feet When I am still on this wooden boat. They can me feel stupid at every instant moment. They can jeer until they are permently quiet. It won't leave any bruise on my leather My will for no limits with only grow bigger. At the end of this journey they will comprehend That we won't die at the edge of the world. God of Gravity will protect us from the great dive, And will turn us upside down to see undiscover people. The limits of their knowledge will evaporate. I will hold the reponsiblity for the excuse They will glory in the guilt of their opinion That we were limited by the deep blue ocean.

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[n/a] kaoriliveshere 9-Jul-06/6:28 AM Reply
I have say that in this poem I descided to rhyme. It is came out better then without rhyming. thank you guys! This poem is about Christopher columbus journey to Cuba help not to limit people's knowledge about the Earth. I hope you guys like it.
[n/a] Ranger 10-Jul-06/12:43 AM Reply
'They can me feel stupid'?

Deep blue ocean is very very very cliched, see if you can be a bit more inventive there.