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Re: After her storm (draft) by Caducus 29-Sep-05/8:08 AM
This poem was extremely beautiful. I love the theme of her tears with the sea and storms. The only small suggestion I might make is to remove the word "darling", I think it takes a little away from the beauty of the rest of the poem.

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