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on After her storm (draft) by Caducus 29 Sep 2005, 8:08 AM
This poem was extremely beautiful. I love the theme of her tears with the sea and storms. The only small suggestion I might make is to remove the word "darling", I think it takes a little away from the beauty of the rest of the poem.