| Re: a comment on Soldier by kev_wannabe |
3-Jun-05/10:08 PM |
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sorry its not a cynical twist
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| Re: a comment on Soldier by kev_wannabe |
3-Jun-05/10:06 PM |
dull?? ok... well theres nothing much bout soldiers...cept fighting wars....rescueing others...so...ya..
y not u write one...lyk u can do ne betta^^
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| Re: Snow by lil_evil_boi |
3-Jun-05/10:00 PM |
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ok...u cant actually smell the sweetness of the snow....and if ur trying to be "imaganitive" then its obvious not working...u shuld read more poems...and poems doesnt have to rhyme ^^
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