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Re: a comment on f*ckyouoldmenandyourrules by Damien_ 19-Apr-05/5:25 PM
Thank you mister Ranger sir, and you are so right about their attitudes. People like you are what we need moer of to have some kind of balance in this place. May I ask which rhymes you weren't that were not your cup of tea? I do appreciate constructive crit whatever some people say about me.
Re: Unfair by sonawrote 19-Apr-05/4:52 PM
This is intense Ella. I think I can relate to this...sometimes...someone just fills you so deeply, that, that,... you find it hard to imagine -- can I really be the one you're looking for? -- But you really are if life puts two people together like that and it feels so incredible, with me I say just go with it.
Re: a comment on f*ckyouoldmenandyourrules by Damien_ 19-Apr-05/4:30 PM
F*UK YOU GOAD!!! Do you think I dont know this is you?
GET A LIFE!!!
GET A LIFE!
Re: a comment on f*ckyouoldmenandyourrules by Damien_ 19-Apr-05/4:23 PM
WOW, thank you sonawrote -- or should I call you Ella?, your support feels great and makes it all worthwhile that someone appreciates what I'm trying to get to even when it does'nt all come out perfect & write yet.

Especially someone who's a chick, haha (sorry, I mean woman). So I don't impress a pack of old men, that's ok with me, lol. F*ck them anyway, THEY MEAN NOTHING TO ME!!!! I can tell from your poems that u had a lot of experience being misunderstood also and hey I respect that.

Wow, coming to New Yourk, that thot spins my head right around. Just walking into something like that, finding the rght people woh can see what im about...my dream...u r taking my breath away right there.

Anyway my normal way is to freestyle right onto paper what I'm thinking but this time I took more time to consider evry word. What do you think is this the right path if I truly want to shoot for that Def poetry Jam? or should I keep more with the spontaneous freessstyle?


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