Re: A Fool's Errand by ALChemy	27-Dec-05/1:26 PM
Didn't like the ending.
Re: sick and demented by sk8boardandpoems	2-Oct-05/12:55 PM
It's good but for the beginning, middle and end.
Re: Fourteen Years by impert&ent	2-Oct-05/12:48 PM
'Sparkbrook' didn't do it for me. Liked the imagery, though they didn't seem to flow very well.
Re: Make Music in Your Heart by Dovina	5-Apr-05/11:37 PM
The content is great, but the flow is awful. Though there were some mediocre lines, for example: 'This is how I learned the piano and how I’ve learned to write now' It sounds like a 5 year old wrote it. And by the way, we are all still learning. The flow seems very elementary and abecedarian, so please work on that. As well, learn to accept criticism. Your comments to the reviews, (any comment to reviewing, if not for elucidation, is wrong in my opinion) were extremely puerile. Accept it, and move on. You shouldn't try to fight with people to change their views to ones you agree with. Be mature.