| Re: Nothing And Everything by DaRkMoOnLuVeR |
5-Mar-05/9:08 AM |
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interesting and i like some of the word choice especially at the end, however it often at times seems just a bit forced and im not quite sure i get the purpose of this poem - 6 -
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| Re: What? by DaRkMoOnLuVeR |
5-Mar-05/9:10 AM |
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uch, no offence but this is terribly terribly cliched, and i dont feel it is all that well written - 4 -
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5-Mar-05/9:15 AM |
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- i am not a very big fan - reminds the rhyming seems quite forced and this reminds me of something a 12 year old might write - 5 -
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
5-Mar-05/9:21 AM |
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its okay - i like the theme and some of the lines in the beginning are nice - but some are also akward - 7 -
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| Re: a note to the politically inactive fundamentalist christians by i_am_the_popsicle |
6-Mar-05/3:42 PM |
its a shame when a group of poets cannot stand a contrarian view, and then on top of it, completely miss the point of a poem
-emyln
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| Re: an early discovery (reworking) by richa |
7-Mar-05/3:59 PM |
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| Re: Care by aurora |
7-Mar-05/4:00 PM |
seems more like a pimple poem ......
-emlyn
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| Re: Letter Harmony by webguy |
7-Mar-05/4:10 PM |
i love this - 10 -
-emlyn
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| Re: Doesn't Hurt Me by Miggy |
17-Aug-05/4:35 PM |
I'm not trying to sound like an elitist because it isn't bad, it just doesn't sound unlike anything I've heard before,
if you get what I'm saying
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