Re: Life by AmberDawn	2-Feb-05/11:58 AM
I wrote this poem when I was 15, I submitted it hoping that I would recieve helpful criticism. The spelling errors are due to my putting the poem in while at work, therefore on a time restriction. Any comments that will actually help would be appreciated. Otherwise, thanks for nothing.
Re: First date (for Larry, a lesbian vampire) by Bachus	2-Feb-05/12:01 PM
I was definitely not expecting that at the end, but the poem is great. It left me wishing there was more to it.