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20 most recent comments by AmberDawn and replies
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Re: a comment on Life by AmberDawn |
2-Feb-05/1:33 PM |
Not mean at all, I appreciate an honest person. Do you know anywhere that has a more friendly, helpful cast of users?
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Re: First date (for Larry, a lesbian vampire) by Bachus |
2-Feb-05/12:01 PM |
I was definitely not expecting that at the end, but the poem is great. It left me wishing there was more to it.
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Re: Life by AmberDawn |
2-Feb-05/11:58 AM |
I wrote this poem when I was 15, I submitted it hoping that I would recieve helpful criticism. The spelling errors are due to my putting the poem in while at work, therefore on a time restriction. Any comments that will actually help would be appreciated. Otherwise, thanks for nothing.
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