replying on C. Morgenstern: Gentle Songs by yonderland
17 Sep 2004, 1:06 AM
Like that version, too. Much different, I think mine is more coloured. Maybe because I did it for a certain person, rather than for accuracy's sake... :)
replying on C. Morgenstern: Gentle Songs by yonderland
16 Sep 2004, 1:24 PM
Yes, I was so busy with the rhymes that I dropped the syntax! ;-) As for the "silent gear," I think it is more appropriate than trying to be direct; the "ether" thing didn't seem to work for me when I tried out the alternatives.
Thanks for the hints, I'll amend the translation as more comments come in. Suggestions are welcome. Best regards, Ralf
Thanks for the hints, I'll amend the translation as more comments come in. Suggestions are welcome. Best regards, Ralf
replying on C. Morgenstern: The Surf by yonderland
16 Sep 2004, 11:04 AM
Thanks - Took me some time to get the measure & pace right. Morgenstern is tricky, but beautiful. Hope it comes across in English.