Re: Love poem (on sense and experience) by thavimatola	25-Jun-04/4:23 PM
Lots of good things here - just needs a touch more to hold it together for me.
Re: deep by bxjay170	25-Jun-04/4:25 PM
spelling and grammar aren't what poetry is about, but the lack of them distracts from the message. All that aside, I could see the feeling behind this. Avoid cliche - deeper _than_ the sea, is not a fresh image.