on Artist's Child by conan the grammarian
29 Jun 2004, 11:38 AM
Great start to your poem. If possible add more detail. I am working on detail in my poems as well. Keep the work up.
on some deleted poem
29 Jun 2004, 11:44 AM
Aswomse Poem I am adding to my faviotes. Check out Afaid and little girl if you can.
on Yet another Morning Glory piss-take by Bobjim
24 Jun 2004, 2:25 PM
It is a great start for something bigger and better.
on Tommorrow by moonlightdance
24 Jun 2004, 2:26 PM
Awsome poem! You are a very creative writer. Nice on the playing of words