Artist's Child

Member since 2004 · Posted 29 Jun 2004 · 1 comment

The drudgery employed in a shrubbery is commonly ignored when a common child plays in the most justified of ways just admiring its pulchritude and nothing more.

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[n/a] hbhpoems 29-Jun-04/11:38 AM Reply

Great start to your poem. If possible add more detail. I am working on detail in my poems as well. Keep the work up.