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Artist's Child (Free verse) by conan the grammarian The drudgery
employed in a shrubbery
is commonly ignored
when a common child plays
in the most justified of ways
just admiring its pulchritude
and nothing more.
Up the ladder:
Wry Edward's wry smile
Down the ladder:
poor ol mama, we miss you much we miss you so so much.
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Posted: June 29, 2004 11:03 AM PDT; Last modified: June 29, 2004 11:03 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.0 Overall Rank: 7787 Comments:
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29-Jun-04/11:38 AM
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Great start to your poem. If possible add more detail. I am working on detail in my poems as well. Keep the work up.
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