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Artist's Child (Free verse) by conan the grammarian

The drudgery employed in a shrubbery is commonly ignored when a common child plays in the most justified of ways just admiring its pulchritude and nothing more.

hbhpoems 29-Jun-04/11:38 AM
Great start to your poem. If possible add more detail. I am working on detail in my poems as well. Keep the work up.




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