Tommorrow

Member since 2004 · Posted 24 Jun 2004 · 2 comments

I'm too tired to be I'll let the world gel over For a while I'd like a magic vial One drop the problems solved The world will cheer And I'll Wake up Nothing is that simple Show your dimples Always smile It only lasts so long It only lasts until tommorrow The truth is quickly setting From a world of clouds Why do we block out? Our chance at something Whats wrong with reality It hurts and now I see But I know It only lasts until tommorrow Don't blink Time rushes by too fast to think Just let things gel around you Don't waste time waiting It only lasts until tommorrow A grain of salt, of sand In a sea of dreams I don't belong But it couldn't last forever Time corrodes With one great splash We'll be washed away Tommorrow

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[10] hbhpoems 24-Jun-04/2:26 PM Reply

Awsome poem! You are a very creative writer. Nice on the playing of words

[7] Dovina 24-Jun-04/3:56 PM Reply

I love the immediacy of great moments, the throwing off of caution. But I think you have dwelt on it too long in this poem. Brevity seems in order, especially for this topic. Good thoughts.