on A new beginning by hobojo
5 Jun 2004, 4:11 PM
ing weakens the verbiage. i want more immediancy from you
on Strength by Freethinker1602
5 Jun 2004, 4:20 PM
show me. dont tell me
on some deleted poem
5 Jun 2004, 4:22 PM
i like the premise, but the execution needs work.