Re: The Snow Queen by Angeline	31-May-04/12:50 PM
Thanks for the vote and comment. Your suggestion is good. This poem is one in a series I'm doing about fairy tales--maybe it follows the story line too closely. And I haven't heard of Carol Shields, but I'll read her. :)
Re: Soldiers (Terzanelle) by Angeline	31-May-04/7:39 AM
Thank you Shin Shuu for the comment and the suggestion on "very hot." I'll think about it and keep the idea, but get rid of "very," which is a blah word. I'm usually pretty good with editing my poems, but that one slipped by me. Good call.
Re: For Antony's unborn by Mona Lisa	31-May-04/4:30 AM
Beautifl ode to an unborn child--I love this line: Close to faraway from everyone