| Re: Unwed by gilded in gold |
23-Jan-05/6:44 PM |
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No Goad, i meant LOL in a good way.
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| Re: Unwed by gilded in gold |
23-Jan-05/5:59 PM |
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| Re: Unwed by gilded in gold |
23-Jan-05/12:20 PM |
to Goad, who considers incomplete thoughts unworthy of interpretation and "mental diarhea" or "meaningless dribble", i say, you're entitled to your preferences, and you're real boring.
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| Re: Fighting before bed by zodiac |
20-May-04/11:02 AM |
the last 6 lines are good.
you need to maybe not use huge words together..
"crass nomenclature,
warm in our eiderdown plicature."
it really, really cuts up the flow. so there!
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| Re: a comment on Unwed by gilded in gold |
20-May-04/8:54 AM |
wow! this is almost funny. i am sorry i don't understand all the words you throw around, but i am not sorry i don't understand where you are coming from. you don't know what else i have written, and who else has interpreted my works, and what poetry i have read. not that i care to tell you.
i am really sorry that you don't like to mentally work while you read poetry, or my poem. i am sorry you like to be spoon-fed. and that you have such strict rules about what it should be, and are not free to have more than one idea about it. i would hate to go to a museum or a gallery with you!
and thanks.. for the constructive criticism. i hope if you actually are a self-deemed expert in the realm of poetry-writing / interpretation (because there ALWAYS is interpretation, varied by reader, uncontrollable) that you come across alittle better to others ... in order to help them... anyway.
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| Re: Back to Sorrow by justjay |
20-May-04/5:59 AM |
i'd say all i grab ARE the links again...
sorry....
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| Re: a comment on Unwed by gilded in gold |
20-May-04/5:57 AM |
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well .. gilded can be taken many ways... i could say, the cracks in the sidewalk are gilded in snow... and it would be something totally different. even tho gilded usually refers to gold. but, ahhh well.
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| Re: a comment on Unwed by gilded in gold |
20-May-04/5:56 AM |
ha
it's not supposed to make a ton of sense. i leave a lot up to interpretation. i like unpainted.
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| Re: a comment on Unwed by gilded in gold |
19-May-04/8:39 PM |
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so what would be better than 'unpainted' ? help
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| Re: a comment on Unwed by gilded in gold |
19-May-04/8:30 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Unwed by gilded in gold |
19-May-04/8:27 PM |
slow down sasha.. you go too fast.
umm... if you had read it, the title actually is -- Unwed
& my username is --- gilded in gold...
meh.
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