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. How she shrieked when I first laid my eager hands on her Would I ever please her as she now thrilled me? When I first caught sight of her, I wanted her for my own. Enchanted by her golden complexion, her slender neck that angled back just so... her seductive curves and the way she pouted just a little in the middle: gentle swell of belly and a perfect curve behind, set afire: undulating, seducing me. I longed to hold her, to feel her weight on me, to turn her this way and that: to handle her gently. I'd stroke her so she'd sing only for me, in her own sweetly timbered tones. I ran my hands over her frame, traced her f-hole with the tip of my finger, and cradled her in my arms. I pressed her to my chest, and stroked and plucked and drew her out. Though she seemed too tightly strung, I eased into her, softly. I tempered my desire for speed, and patiently sought to learn what she might need so that she would, in time. give me all that I wanted, all I dreamed.

horus8 16-Aug-02/1:30 PM
negative d.a, i worked on prolonging the magic...john mcCrea is a genius and a fine human being...i helped on "Mexico", and "alpha beta parking lot...both musically and lyrically, but john was by far the master mind behind it all, a true poet and gifted musician...somethings are better left unsaid....all of their work is above the point of pointing though to say the least o




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