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love song (Concrete) by <~>

. How she shrieked when I first laid my eager hands on her Would I ever please her as she now thrilled me? When I first caught sight of her, I wanted her for my own. Enchanted by her golden complexion, her slender neck that angled back just so... her seductive curves and the way she pouted just a little in the middle: gentle swell of belly and a perfect curve behind, set afire: undulating, seducing me. I longed to hold her, to feel her weight on me, to turn her this way and that: to handle her gently. I'd stroke her so she'd sing only for me, in her own sweetly timbered tones. I ran my hands over her frame, traced her f-hole with the tip of my finger, and cradled her in my arms. I pressed her to my chest, and stroked and plucked and drew her out. Though she seemed too tightly strung, I eased into her, softly. I tempered my desire for speed, and patiently sought to learn what she might need so that she would, in time. give me all that I wanted, all I dreamed.

horus8 16-Aug-02/1:07 PM
first off, i never called you a "cow fucker", cow fucker...secondly an aquaintance of mine mr. kilmer happens to be a resident of taos and i frequent his ranch often with my son...secondly go to gangbox...see me "acting" next to beverly d'angelo w/ a diet coke in her hand (in brief encounters a short that i not only wrote, acted in, and directed, but spent a great deal of energy putting into motion...people from all over the country come out here to swing at the profession of acting (i connected), but lo and behold the majority of them find themselves acting next to rob lowe with a dildo in his hand(it hurt him more than it hurt me). but not i...nay...i am a man of many talents sir, and i spend a great deal of time not only as mr.hollywood, but also as mr. manhatten, and mr. mom, and writing lyrics for bands such as 'smash mouth'(i hate em too) and 'cake', and placeibo not to mention the fact that i play a wide range of instruments and am doing a movie with jon voight in september which is why i have ' the money', 'the time' and the patience to deal with an imposter like you. i si,r will have you know, am a 'life artist', and i prefer to spend my time building people up...not tearing them down...not that you have anything worth tearing down i'm just stating a fact. heir.gifthorse.tampon.hemophelia.w




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