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. How she shrieked when I first laid my eager hands on her Would I ever please her as she now thrilled me? When I first caught sight of her, I wanted her for my own. Enchanted by her golden complexion, her slender neck that angled back just so... her seductive curves and the way she pouted just a little in the middle: gentle swell of belly and a perfect curve behind, set afire: undulating, seducing me. I longed to hold her, to feel her weight on me, to turn her this way and that: to handle her gently. I'd stroke her so she'd sing only for me, in her own sweetly timbered tones. I ran my hands over her frame, traced her f-hole with the tip of my finger, and cradled her in my arms. I pressed her to my chest, and stroked and plucked and drew her out. Though she seemed too tightly strung, I eased into her, softly. I tempered my desire for speed, and patiently sought to learn what she might need so that she would, in time. give me all that I wanted, all I dreamed.

horus8 16-Aug-02/12:17 PM
hardly you twit...d.a doesn't get drunk and make mistakes like me, and if you really 'read' our writing you would kick yourself for implying such a farce...no, d.a does have quite a few secret names, but i'm not gonna fuck up twice this morning so...you'll have to crack that fortune cookie on your own, he/she(i wish he was a she, but the writing reeks of an a-sexual man) z's writing is femme and vaginal, my writing is over the top, phallic bisexual, and d.a is neutralishly acute borderline sociopathic, all very seperate...yet distinctive...where does that leave razorgrin...well in the land of shaskowski.. i think, but...who knows..after all we're writers not mind readers!




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