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Unfinished (Lyric) by Blake

If only I might view passion rejoined Or merest sign, to lift me from abyss But peace I only find in verses coined Whilst poetic desire suffices for a kiss; Still, let this serve not to shackle you to me I intend to rise through lyric, joyously For, as such work, my sorrow cannot remain When the very caress of a hand frees the chain.

Bachus 16-Aug-02/8:58 AM
You were more relevant alive. Or were you? Nay. Nay. I scraped your poem onto the curb, but still I reek in such a way like mother's broiled cunt filet.




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