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diving (Free verse) by keatsImnot

THE SERENITY BENEATH THE SEA THE SILENT CALM TRANQUILITY IT SOOTHES MY MIND IT PURGES ME OF ALL MY SOULS HOSTILITY WHEN I FLY THROUGH WATERS BLUE THROUGH SHOALS OF FISH OF BRILLIANT HUE A THOUSAND COLOURED CORAL TOO I'M IN A WORLD THAT SEEN BY FEW FOREVER I SHOULD LIKE TO DWELL IN THIS WORLD BENEATH THE SWELL WITH DOLPHIN TURTLE SHARK AND SHELL AND STAY ENCHANTED IN IT'S SPELL

horus8 14-Aug-02/5:37 PM
de capitilize..and quit screaming..it would be so much better underwater quitely rendered 7/10. hocus.jaundice.lice.malicey




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