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Diminishing (Concrete) by <~>

For this one it's Jesus, for that one, hate For some it's a drink, for others it's H One draws a card, another rolls dice He's got his speedboat, she drips with ice For her it's him, for him it's speed Each is itching to sate a need She thinks she'll never be thin He's getting off at the gym This boy can't get enough That girl likes it real rough Some seek out a fight What I do is write I mark it down I question each Have you found What you seek? You try, And so Do I

horus8 11-Aug-02/10:17 PM
yes, you do, and so do i..thank the right hand for it's talent it may one day soon want another body. i'm not trusting it these days...hey z this is a 'ringer' great conrasts and noun selection. i must say i'm quite fond of your "yours selection". reads like a bullit kills with an honest days work! your hoof has been shoed! race on!u




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