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pull (Free verse) by skaskowski

where have all the voices gone? why cant i reach out to her? where has all the laughter gone? where did she pull passion from? i dont know why, but i am empty my tears are dry my heart is broken if she had spoken maybe i could miss her now could feel her now where have all the glances gone? why cant i pull her to me? where have all our whispers gone? where did i pull frailty from? i dont know why, but i am searching my hand is alone my arms are empty if i had spoken maybe she would miss me now would feel me now...

horus8 9-Aug-02/10:43 PM
i enjoy your writing, and the simple ones too. you have impeccable taste. with a well rounded structue. pregnant yet starving.......i ring my bell for another! another, and another i am a poet you are a writer. we are both readers...yes we read...i need to read..you write well..your beak is a fine ceramic your hoof is sure footed...write to live!??




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