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Faith (Free verse) by Pervy Elf

I tell you secrets behind closed doors. I tell you I think that life is a bore. You preach to me like some small child. I am wrong, you say. Life is still good. God will help you. I laugh at you, and you frown. Really? Well, where was your God when my innocence died? All those years ago. Still a child. Where was your God then to protect me? Obviously he was too busy to help... Me. Your God is a lie! Your God is a fake! Will you now burn me at the stake? For telling you the truth. Ah, truth! Do you get it now? Your God never cared! Your God was never real! Understanding like a shot from a gun.

horus8 30-Dec-03/2:25 PM
God is simply positively charged atoms working in a universe of strings. You don't have to perpetuate your money or children or control to understand god is not having to control anything. You should study up on some budhism and get with it. This christian god thing is as pathetic as the pagan green man all the way to the egyptiand ra to jesus, to budha, to the garden the floods the angels the space men the krishna it's all the same, it wasn't until the fucking jews decided to starrt writing it all down the way they wanted to in order to regain control of the women and their goddess religions that shitted started to go south. I bet you haven't even read the bible? I bet I could up end evry fucking article of faith you've ever stood on, sentence by sentence. 300,000 years since neanderthal went cro magnun, and you're talking about faith while at the same time passing judgement. Here's some news. You are both wrong and simple minded.




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