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Faith (Free verse) by Pervy Elf

I tell you secrets behind closed doors. I tell you I think that life is a bore. You preach to me like some small child. I am wrong, you say. Life is still good. God will help you. I laugh at you, and you frown. Really? Well, where was your God when my innocence died? All those years ago. Still a child. Where was your God then to protect me? Obviously he was too busy to help... Me. Your God is a lie! Your God is a fake! Will you now burn me at the stake? For telling you the truth. Ah, truth! Do you get it now? Your God never cared! Your God was never real! Understanding like a shot from a gun.

horus8 30-Dec-03/2:16 PM
"The final step of control"? What are you falling asleep watching the sci fi channel. If anyone is out for control it's religion and all you fucking faith and land mongers. Selling 700 club prayer towels and taking advantage of peoples lose fucking change. Causing every war to date. Yeah, he's your faith right here. Blind and usual. Ever wonder wht John the babtist was beheaded. It was because he was a psychotic asshole that couldn't mind his own fucking business.




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