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Lenola prays with a stiletto (Free verse) by SupremeDreamer

Midnight creeps while Lenola quivers engulfed in the devils breath sulphurous and keen. Despite confessions and well-thumbed rosary, she remains squalid- eyeing her husbands stiletto. She quivers in odium; forsaken- guilt gnaws her senses as she begins to realize that Jesus's magic has long been depleted. Her discarded rosary remains on the last pew alongside her silver cross necklace. The jeweled hilt held in her hands instilled serenity. The blade replaced god as she drove it deep into the priest- elated by his blood savagely spilt upon her skin. Murder with a jeweled stiletto became her salvation.

horus8 26-Dec-03/10:08 PM
What was that your New Years revolution to be nice to me? Thanks, those were some charming things to say, and yes my son's doing very well. he goes to this great school, and he's really a lovely young man.the perfect combination of me and his mother. Sensitie yet kind and giving yet not easy to take advantage of. Outside of my dark world of poetry I'm actually quite sober and reseved these days. I smoke a pipe and read mostly. little acting here, a lot of writing there. things are coming along, slowly but properly. Thanks for asking, and we all know your going to do well this year, now don't we. you're in with the baby jesus. Scoundrel.




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