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Existence (Free verse) by ThoughtfulSoul

Like Stars I fall into the background Like love I think I lost myself Like everything I've ever known it disappeared eventually To exists where you don't want to Is like not existing at all But to exist where you want to and not to be wanted Is like not existing at all

horus8 6-Aug-02/11:30 AM
well first you have to be kidnapped from your bed one night. then driven into the desert by mr. self control, your nice neighbor that gives you candy. then bound, sodomized, and burned alive while your parents are at home getting high and 'swinging'. What, not tenacious enough for you. how about practicing what your name implys and being a little more patient and open minded. venting, is how the dutch stay healthy. all bow to the 'flying dutchman'.i




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