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Hot Maid (Haiku) by Agemo-Z

She comes to clean up And I think to myself, damn... Won't she dust my wang?

horus8 6-Aug-02/11:14 AM
it's really a very specific style hinge ya see. first, it involves not wanting to be involved. second, it takes guts, and a bad sense of grammatical flatulence. third, if i concerned myself with such trifle insecurities as commas.periods/hyphons.and other 'filler' i would not be able to sleep at night. sleep/ go crazy/sleep/ i'm lazy. lazy boys don't concern themselves with such things, and let's remember i am a real 'streete poete' thus, then, there is no need for commas.for i am verbalizing the spoken word 'flowing', and performing. i am the instrument of god fool!. not the comma counter! that pudding spoon is left for proof readers and editors not the "artist" formerly known as horus8!l




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