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I Hate You (Free verse) by mytenderrage

I despise you. You took my heart, And ripped it in to shreds. Until there was nothing left. I detest you. You stabbed my chest Until my blood flowed out Into a puddle of crimson Beneath my aching figure. Until there was a hole Of emptiness within My abused body, Helpless and hopeless, Cold and dead. You had offered me warmth, But I was so na??ve. I believed you. I wanted you. I did not anticipate All this pain All this hurt. You went away With hardly a farewell. How dare you go And leave me all alone? I am so lonely, I need someone. I hate you, I hate you. You hurt me the most When you didn???t mean to. I hate you, I hate you. You left my life forever, With barely a farewell. I hate you, I hate you. I hate you because I love you.

horus8 5-Aug-02/8:58 PM
hey d.a...you ever think that maybe you're so far right that your left. i love your shit. sometimes. it is truly cutting edge to say the least..but..fuckin ey..even a child knows when to quit kicking a dead cat..i mean ..this chick is probably swinging from the rafters right now cuz you force people to change their awareness.. and deal with you, but it's not always about that..some of these kids need a subtle more gentle push..not the "sunset flip"(patented move of don morraco.wwf 1983..anyway you're right to the greater portion of the triple beam. do some "good angel" deeds for a change.......naw..fuck you! smile you're cute and tight when you go after a point p.s. i would like to dedicate the plains of africa (1-6) to you(recent submissions) and your pet monkey=give up you'll never teach him to read! but god, it's fun to watch ya try..




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