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I wish I had a friend (Free verse) by un_oying

The glass is so cold The body is bold The flavor is old 2003 sure is a good year I sip from the glass I say it’s my last I lied I drink and I drink It’s to bad I can’t think Someone please tell me to stop I stumble and mumble My fingers they fumble Oh where oh where are my keys The walk from the bar It sure seemed far I can’t wait to get home and sleep The lights are so bright From the darkest of night Oh where oh where is the road The last I remembered It was my right of way Now I lay here in the grave I wish I had a friend.

horus8 12-Oct-03/3:38 PM
Right now? We're wishing you had a friend too. It would spare us the trouble of foraging through your rubbish for a reason. A reason to why and how you've made it this far without losing a limb or accidentilly blaming the world for your stupidity. unless you have, then naturally, I apologize.




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