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Fuck your fucking face monkey fucker (Haiku) by Bachus

They will get you too And trust me when I say that They mean business. In their monkey suits they pass out flyers at the local colleges. "Buy one get one free" "Save the whale, dolphin, and tree" "Free used mustache rides". My monkey won't talk to me anymore, since you taught him how to read.

Joe-joe 3-Oct-03/4:33 AM
I meant not offense. I think sometimes we just throw stuff "out there" without much thought. Maybe ist's a product of boredom or a need for attention...I know how good your work can be and just don't feel this piece is representative of your talents. And Horus, we all have our talents...no need for self-indulging proclaimations here... P.S the last three lines of your comment above illustrates my point.




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