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My days work (Free verse) by lucky_cmc

A days work has just been completed And what do I have to show it my aching feet, my sore back, and my sore hands. My days work has been complete. I finish practicing and i clean my room, Hey, I even looked over music that I probably can't play But I feel complete with a very good tired. My sleepy eyes and my hurt head. I've finished what I had to do. I finish my goal for today, Maybe tomorrow will be easier. But will see cause tomorrow is another day.

horus8 29-Jul-02/10:23 PM
I withdraw the hoof, and present you with sparrow beak, fear not my son it will grow hard and strong and fast..like a hawk...like a hawk headed god's beak. you have a humble heart, and are forgiven.
Whoooh! hold everything, sorry "divinity complex" leak. overdose...to much beak...go-in-g down. ha..ha.. scared you uh..i'm a quick little fucker, but never mind me kid let's talk about you. being bored's okay just put some fuckin passion into it, do it for hours as if it was your guitar or girlfriend. fucking write to save your life, or not at all. luv horus8 ps drink more wine.predator.eye.androgynous.hole




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