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minotaur (Free verse) by Bill Z Bub

keep one hand on the wall and turn to face the bull this child of ancient curse did work the daedalus machine and found you tugging thread all through these hidden halls keep in mind this thing is part man part bull and part maze

horus8 20-Sep-03/7:37 PM
Profound, but somehow the last stanza is too giving? Does that make any sense?




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