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My days work (Free verse) by lucky_cmc

A days work has just been completed And what do I have to show it my aching feet, my sore back, and my sore hands. My days work has been complete. I finish practicing and i clean my room, Hey, I even looked over music that I probably can't play But I feel complete with a very good tired. My sleepy eyes and my hurt head. I've finished what I had to do. I finish my goal for today, Maybe tomorrow will be easier. But will see cause tomorrow is another day.

horus8 29-Jul-02/6:44 PM
your journal is in the second hand drawer on the left of your bed under the big jugs magazine and corn-nuts. could you please keep it out of my field of vision lest i be forced to apply my tongue like a canabalistic blind pigmy, head hunting little daydreamers to lick and read their acne scarred faces with my brail detecting tongue (my retard lashing flagella) i know where the short bus picks you up, and i have a highly accurate blowgun. beware of shifting bambo. and the hard blow.p




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