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Perfect (Free verse) by mytenderrage

Look at you. You are so perfect. You found your desires And wishes. You have it all now. You will be happy. You will be joyous. Going on with your perfect life With your perfect love. You will love her forever, I???m sad to admit it???s true, Because you two are perfect. Perfect passion and adoration. Where does that leave me? In the dark corner of hopelessness, I wish I could find someone perfect, But I cannot find him.

horus8 29-Jul-02/5:26 PM
the sharks have come to smell your work. they have left nothing for me, but a raven crushed stain upon the road 18 mls. south of davenport, your beak is bent and pointing south east. follow. follow the 'hoof' its shape is right(write)o




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