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reflexion - dayspring to dusk (second version) (Free verse) by Don-Quixote

you are dreamer, sleepwalking with sword, piercing the center of the stream, dousing the seed. drinking hour, immersed in the waters of life but breath will not come about. friction causes explosion dream made real, life pullulates and spreads visions blossom from sprout.

Bachus 17-Sep-03/9:00 PM
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