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My nails are in love with your chalkboard (Other) by Jeremi B. Handrinos

1. You let your papers expire. You are as valid in this country as a Mexican mule. 2. You have to go back to your country and he has to ask you to come back and marry him. 3. Don't fuck with me Patricia, I'm smarter than you, so shut the fuck up, and watch who you call a WHORE, whore. 4. What type of whore utilizes the handicapped for citizenship? A scared one. 5. Fuck, and rock for your freedom for the next three years, I hope your oral spell on him doesn't wear off, you'll have to find some other sucker. 6. Hija de su putisima madre. 7. Your fiancee has to ask immigration to allow you to come back to the USA... Heaven forbid you have an accident. 8. You need to go back to your country, or shut the fuck up before I send you back EARLY. Legally you have to get married, come back to the USA, after a while, naturally. How long you can keep fucking off people that confide their personal lifes with you? Peasant. 9. As your friend, earlier, (if you would have trusted me, like I did you, with my sensitive information?) I could have helped you as a friend, get legal. 10. Say ONE MORE WORD about me with your Judas breath and you will be La Migra'd whore. Got that? 11. Being with someone for the papers is the lowest form of whoring, Judas. 12. I always wondered why David climbed that mountain in Equador? He was flipping you off. Guess what? I'm with him. 13. In the future? Don't fuck with the devil you'll get pitch forked.

Bachus 16-Sep-03/6:47 PM
She's not defamed just an illegal alien that should watch who she pokes her lit on in her writing forever. I'm just letting her know that she's not my friend, and I think she's a fucking cunt. secondly, i changed the title once, removing her name from the original title, making it as aloof as any of my other 300 poems on this site. this piece is no different than any other poetical assault I've ever pulled on others or that they've pulled on me... Except for the fact that this one ends a very good friendship. why you should pretend to give more of a shit than me makes you a shit that has no grasp behind what you are chirping about. You see I'm letter her know that i don't play fucking head trips popping over with people out of the blue and going hi this is my husband we have a sacred bond blee blah blue and expect me to play along especially because Patricia has a notorious habit of getting in to a guy for a while and completely blowing every one else off while somehow convincing herself that that is NORMAL. it's not, what is normal is for me to be a little weirded out by the whole thing and concerned. threfore it dawned on me why she had been having such guy problems which included even me in the past. Period. In other words why would she even bother to come over to my house inn the first place? Did she do that to everyone? What was she expecting me to do? How would she behave if I did that to her, and then dissappeared? and many more various question all of which are balanced upon the fact that she's illegal and that's what' been standing in her way. Because Tauruses and COWS GRAZE LAZILLY and blow shit off until it comes back to haunt them. Now obviously I would never turn her in or hurt her physically, but i want her to know that i shared my deep secrets with her yet she hid this from me like it was some sort of game. i don't like being used to make people jealous or as any item of leverage ever. period. I'm not one to fuck with. Period.




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