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What Do You Want From Me? (Free verse) by Bonehiss

Your wit is sharp, Like a needle in my eye, As I fall to my knees Adorned in agonizing disfigurement. What do you want from me? You ask in mock innocent bewilderment, Laughing inside like a gibbon Gone mad in the forest. You watch me cling To the dark pillar Of my self loathing, Adding the final touch With smug cruelty: Can't we just be friends?

horus8 22-Aug-03/3:55 PM
Hilarious, as funny as birdman's hero poem easilly.




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