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Perfection (Free verse) by justjay

Your eyes, Your hair, Your face. Perfection that can not be described. When you smile, You light up the room. Your presence in a room alone Can bring up people's day. To control a whole atmosphere, Is a sign of pefection alone. A perfection that can only be reached by a few. You have reached it, reached perfection from the start.

Bachus 3-Aug-03/3:05 PM
Hmm mm. Well, it's odd and a bit tingly.




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