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The Kansas City Chiefs suck (Haiku) by Jeremi B. Handrinos

A Boy hangs from wires. Kansas city, miracle. Luck, not poetry. Poet and knows it? What kind of poet says that? One with a ladder.

kdub 30-Jul-03/8:37 PM
alright, I like the first stanza, but after that it gets kind of confusing and abstract, I'm not sure what you're trying to say-- the trick about haiku is to be both concise and accurate. Good start though.




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