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hermetic (Pimple) by Bill Z Bub

My chest is a cauldron, heaving. my heart is a wicked spell, seething. my brain is a crone, cackling. and the candles have turned to black pools in the hollow vats of my face. you tricked me with your secret. you cradled me in lies. you trapped me with your steel-pin tongue and stripped me down to burning skies, walked widdershins while streaming blood, and left this devil to the flood.

horus8 20-Jul-03/11:20 PM
and the candles have turned (1 note)

you tricked me with your secrets
you kept me with your chants
you held me with your blood (second note)

Besides that, you gotta know I dug it.

I'll wait to see if you edit to vote.







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