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cut yourself (Free verse) by Crakyamuni

Is it innapropriate to cut this ill will from the flesh surging waves of losing pressed, skin, and wind, flowered dress take this out and show it off,ignorance is bliss I scoff at this malnutritioned kiss cutting out the unwanted pieces of palpatating veins there never was a clever way to reinvent my name nothing normal, acting out, borderline no fucking doubt Border brother in their eyes Border herders, they despise, kill the unique and steal their eyes to reinvent our names in lies hedonism is a lie, In all this friend I do despise the bloodletting wishes in your eyes and misconstrued life upon her thighs.

Jeremi B. Handrinos 20-Jul-03/2:42 PM
And there "naver" will be. Sounds like a lovely trip to the barber.




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