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Acoustic (Free verse) by zzinnia66

He tasted like copper his music, like blood. I gave him the spark but uncoiled his wind and left him onstage, blue and blind.

scitz 15-Jul-03/3:55 PM
Its like the fabulous baker boys Z style ! pffeifered up to the max.

now light that cute cigar, pull up that pale denier and show some thigh.

Very suave, sultry liked the rasp.9

welcome back -you bang




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