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Walls (Free verse) by razorgrin

Outside, the wind blows cold, whipping faces and making knuckles ache. The dark is hanging like a heavy blanket over our town. Wolves run out there among the trees, houses and buildings seeking prey among those roaming between glittering frozen branches. The only barrier between me and the wind and wolves are walls. Walls, just a few inches of wood, glass and paint. The inside walls of my room are the colou of heartblood and so I lay in my warm bed, sleeping soundly. Behind my thin walls, the wind howls.

horus8 22-Jul-02/12:37 PM
Since you're working with the government... I was thinking that my friend Gary Condit is hiring.. well you being an "inturn" "intern" "intorn" and all. Just looking out for friends (by the way nice poem up there i gave you a seven)( cuz of the walls the wolves and the howling, you know all of that "deep shit" any way gotta go get more coffee to sit here all day(since i work at home) when i'm not performing, that way i can smoke a fat joint, lean back, and really start to put more effort into understanding our relationship. cuz i'm concerned. with luv, the son of isis.r




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