Poemranker [Replying] Thu Nov 21 22:10:15 PST 2024

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MotherF*ckers Who Fuck Above/Two Story Apartment (Other) by JoyLuck

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horus8

30-Jun-03/2:21 PM

And it doesn't say anything? What are you blind? Because, I believe it says a lot.

1) For one, it's a new form of dada poetry entirely that this beautiful young man created in his mind as easily as it takes you to eat a gallon of ice cream.

2)It clearly says he's lonely, horny, stoned, bored, observant and artistic, not to mention getting a free show.

3)Uses words to not only create an entirely new way of using poetry as art, but does it with more humor then you could muster up from another lonely night of eating fritos and watching three's company, again.

4)Proves to the world that you have yet to have a real orgasm, so quick faking it bitch and go finger bang yourself 'till you piss and collapse please, now! Get!

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